
For the Long Ridge Writer’s Group course I’m taking, Shape, Write and Sell Your Novel, I’m working on my second to last assignment, which is to revise my prologue and chapter one.
I’m not going to post the entire assignment, because it’s around 5,000 words. But I’m offering up the revised prologue. This is the 3rd revision the prologue has undergone, and it’s the 4th revision for chapter one. After I receive notes from my LRWG instructor, I will likely make one more revision and then call the prologue and chapter one finished. It’ll feel good to have a part of this book completely edited.
Of course there’s always more to be done to make any writing better. But at some point it has to be “finished.” Otherwise I’ll just keep editing this for the rest of my life. Feel free to let me know what you think; I’m always open to constructive criticism.