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Sunday Writing News

Developing a writing career, whether part time or full, is at the least, 70% marketing.  This week I built my Facebook page.  I hope, dear reader, that you will feel free to use this outlet to stay in touch with me.  I’m most interested in knowing what my readers like to read, what they think of anything I post and what they might want to see on my blog.

This week I will get another step closer to publishing my first poetry anthology.  I will let you in on a little secret–my true goal is to have it up and ready for public consumption within two weeks.  I’ve been working on it for awhile, and there is little remaining to accomplish.

Regarding Out of the Sea, I’m still working on my edits & rewrites.  By the end of this month, I’ll be 1/5 through.  So I have to pick it up a little bit to make my April 30 goal, but I think it’s still very much within my grasp.

Finally, the last part of Snowed In will be posted up this Friday.  Who do you think the killer is?

Edit: I apologize that this post did not get published at noon today. It was my own fault–I entered the wrong publishing time by mistake.  

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Snowed In, Part Three

David spent the next hour pacing his room, typewriter and the promise of a story for Miss Walker forgotten. I’ve known Mr. Barrow for three years now, I think I would have spotted if he was a killer. Thinking back on those years, he cataloged what he knew of the man. Mr. Barrow often woke early, ate breakfast early and left for work early. He worked long hours, often not returning until nine or ten at night, when the rest of the house was turning in. On weekends, he talked about the stories he had in the works, with a knowing smile and a secretive whisper. David only saw him lose his temper once in the last three years, when another journalist scooped his story. Even then, he didn’t think Mr. Barrow capable of murder, and he couldn’t imagine Tommy trying to pull a fast one on Mr. Barrow.

Yes, Tommy was a headstrong boy, David assessed. But even Miss Walker, who was ever gentle in her criticisms, claimed that Tommy’s strongest skills did not include the written word. That Mr. Barrow would murder anyone, least of all Tommy, was an impossibility in David’s estimation. Tommy did not take his own life, he thought, repeating the words in his head like a puzzled mantra.

David left his room again and went to the common room down the hall. The only sounds emanating from the room was the rustling of newspaper and the wind, but the wind was present everywhere today. “McCullough,” he greeted, attempting a non-committal sort of friendly tone, though he worried his voice sounded a little too high not to come across as nervous. Clearing his throat, he added, “Just the fellow I was hoping to see.”

McCullough looked up from the paper, which stretched suspended between his scrubbed-clean hands. Did they move Tommy? Or was he scrubbing them clean from something else? David wished he’d bothered to notice when he saw him earlier in the stairwell. When he said nothing, David moved into the room and hovered near one of the two sofas before ultimately deciding it was best to remain standing. He rested his arm upon the mantlepiece. “What were you up to after breakfast,” he asked curiously. “I mean, did you see anything odd, or, did Tommy seem strange?”

McCullough laughed, throwing his head back. “You want to know if I thought Tommy seemed strange? All of you seem strange—I only just arrived here, after all.”

David felt his face heat up. He’s trying to make me look like a fool. “Very well, I can see that…but did you see him, at any rate?”

“So you’re playing detective now, are you? Yes, I saw him. I was sitting here, looking for job postings—as I’m doing now—and saw him walk by toward the stairs. I presumed he was going up to his room.”

Frowning, David pressed on. “Did you speak to him, or vice versa?” He decided to ignore McCullough’s snide remark about playing detective. I need to pick my battles, he determined, and finding out about Tommy was more important.

“No, we didn’t speak. Look, I’ll say it plain: I didn’t kill the lad. Maybe you did.” McCullough lifted the newspaper again; his face disappeared behind its pages.

David bristled. His back straightened and he felt his shoulders tense like a giant was pressing them together with its vice-hands. “I did no such thing.” Walking from the room, he decided McCullough must have killed Tommy, and was now trying to turn the tables around on him. I have to warn Miss Walker. But Miss Walker wasn’t in her room, or, if she was, she didn’t answer when David knocked five minutes later. He checked Tommy’s room too. He even went to his room to look outside, hoping she’d not decided to brave the weather in hopes of finding Mr. Barrow or the police.

The snow swirled so fast that he might as well have been staring at a white wall. He caught sight of a flake or two, but only for a second before it flitted back into the flock of weather. Pressing his nose to the cold glass, David squinted his eyes in an effort to see better, but with no success. He turned from the window with a sigh and jumped several inches into the air when he saw her standing in his doorway. “Miss—Miss Walker.”

“I was resting. I figured it was you knocking on my door because McCullough’s in the common room and says it wasn’t him.”

“Are you alright,” David crossed his room toward her, welcoming her in from the doorway. “Please, sit.” He pulled his desk chair into the middle of the room and gently guided her into the seat.

“After what happened with Tommy…I went back to my room for awhile. I was starting to doze off. I…can’t believe you just found him like that.” She looked down at her hands, folded neatly in her lap.

“I wish I hadn’t.” David lowered himself onto the edge of his bed. “Miss Walker, I think McCullough was responsible for Tommy’s death.”

“I know,” she answered instantly, eyes darting up to meet his gaze from across the room. “You defended Mr. Barrow so vehemently.”

“But you think it could have been him?”

She shrugged. “I don’t know. How well do we really know people?” Miss Walker sniffed at the air. “Do you smell burning?”

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Out of the Sea: Prologue and Other Thoughts

My goal was to finish rewriting not only my prologue, but Chapter One.  Well, I made it through the prologue.  A matter of visiting with friends I’ve not seen in some time–though well worth it–made it necessary for me to amend my goals for the first chapter with assigning a deadline of Tuesday.  I don’t think these extra two days will much hurt my overall goal.

Nevertheless, I’m pleased with the prologue.  I’ve taken a lot out and really focused on a single scene, as I believe the best prologues are just enough to set the stage.  Too many scenes and it starts, to me at least, to feel like another chapter.

I’ve uploaded a pdf of my prologue as it now stands.  Take a read! :)

Out of the Sea Prologue

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Getting in the Mood

One of the trickiest elements of writing historical fiction isn’t attempting to apply research toward perfecting those nuances which transport the reader back in time, but rather to get into the head of characters who lived in the past–perhaps even hundreds, or dare I venture, thousands of years ago.

I find the best way to further acclimate myself with historical fiction characters is to conduct activities with limitations as close to those they experienced as I can safely replicate.

Among my favorite is to sit down and write by hand, with only candle light, with a quill or dip pen and a pot of ink.  This isn’t an excuse to practice calligraphy, because I’ve always been horrid at it.  But rather, sitting at my mid-19th century writing desk (complete with velvet padding), I am able to appreciate what it must have been like to have to conduct all business through written letters.  How often do we write by hand anymore?  It takes a lot longer and after a half hour of constantly adjusting the pressure of the pen or quill, my hand was tired.

I feel like some kind of Wall-E post-apocalyptic prisoner saying that, so accustomed to a keyboard and screen that I’ve nearly forgotten what it meant to really sit down and write.

Five additional helpful activities include:

1. Walking to the nearest market, buying food and carrying it home.  This offers an added benefit of exercise.  Be careful of cars though, and if it’s summer, don’t buy anything cold unless you literally live down the street.

2. Listen to music popular in the day of your character(s). Added benefit of broadening your musical horizons.  Beware: you might fall in love with what you’re hearing.

3. Bake bread.  Without a bread machine.  Added benefit: delicious, warm, fresh baked bread right from your own kitchen.

4. Grow something in your garden.  Don’t have a garden? Even better!  Make one first.  Double added benefit: healthy veggies and exercise.

5. Visit a living museum.  Being a resident of New England, my two faves are Mystic Seaport: The Museum of America and the Sea, and Sturbridge Village.  But such places are more common than you think!  You probably have one within an hour of your home.  Added benefit: you’ll learn things.  Lots of things.

In what ways do you get into your character’s thoughts?

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