Last night I was early for kempo. An hour early, to be exact. I decided to use the time to begin rewriting Snowed In. Like any self respecting writer I have a notebook and pen within easy grasp so I began writing by hand. Of course, my progress was slower than my 88 WPM typing, but this yielded good results. The writing itself is better…stronger. Picking out where I needed to show versus tell was easier as was putting myself in the actual scene.
I will post the scene I wrote yesterday, as soon as I have the chance to type it up. For comparison sake I will also post the first scene of my original draft. You can be the judge.
Maybe I will write my NaNo2012 by hand this year…
